I just wanted to thank everyone who contributed to my final design, all your help has been greatly appreciated.
Attached are my final schematic (Doesn't include connectors, Indicator Led or 24v to 12v convertor), my pcb and the ground plane to make the slots where traces need to cross easier to see.
I have ordered the necessary components to bread board the circuit before printing the pcb, so until then any and all feedback in regards to optimizastion, design, design checking, layout, etc is helpful.
If I remember I will make sure to come back and post an image of the assembled pcb.