The sounds and feel of the keys you describe is pretty typical, though you may have a bad example and/or be more sensitive to their apparent shortcomings than people tended to be when these machines were new. The BBC micro's keyboard was about the best around when the machine was being sold, and was well known as one of its best features.
The Master keyboard was never quite as nice as the Model B, and it did always have a bit of a metallic 'ring' to it.
I never had an Electron, though I remember it as being a definite step down from the B in a number of ways. It was always known as a cheap substitute for the Model B, and was never popular.
You might be able to clean or lubricate the keys if you want to, but are you really going to do a lot of typing on a 30+ year old computer?