A couple noted regarding the manual uploaded 09 January 2014. (If you're still accepting constructive criticism that is.
S1.2 Par.5: "Both the nominal 650mV threshold voltage and the
300 330(ohm)..."
S1.2 Par.5: ~middle ~middle "A typical A typical"
S1.2 Following the Error calculations: The paragraph begins "This 2mA is drawn..." It's a little odd as the calculation was finished with 130uA, then you jump back a calculation and talk about 2mA. Might I suggest moving the reasoning and details of the 2mA for ZD1 to a paragraph before the error calculations. Something like: "The VEE regulator is more complicated" -> Paragraph about ZD1 and mA requirements and stability -> Current source Paragraph -> Error Calcs -> Paragraph on error effects.
S1.2 Final Par: Change "It" to "Q3" in Sentence 2. "It" is ambiguous.
S1.3 P1: "input power rejection compounds" comes in from no where. I think it needs some explanation.
S1.3 Table: Needs a title/label.
General: pick a consistent scheme for your diagrams. Fig1.1 used blue and Red with dotted and dashed lines, where Fig1.4 uses red and Green with all dashed lines. Add a legend to Fig 1.4, which will then eliminate the need for the
italics note while referencing Fig1.4 (any such notes, if required, should be with the figure.) In my experience, green is a difficult colour to get right in documents, getting a green dark enough such that it prints well in B+W makes it hard to distinguish from blue. I stick with Red/Blue. Further, dotted lines (such as those in Fig1.1) are more difficult to follow with the eye and don't scale well when printed, dashed (------) and dash-dot (-.-.-.-.-.-) lines are best IMNSHO.
Nits/style:
Fig1.1: 1) The {Rectifier -> Regulator -> OUT} Main power path is difficult to follow, too many 90s in the line. Possibly make the Regulator more "inline" from Rectifier to out. i.e. left to right. 2) The Power line isn't easily distinguished from the 'low power' lines such as those driving the current sources off Vcc.
Table 1: Spacing... (As I'm sure you already know.)
One final thing.
LaTeX FTW!
PS: I'm learning a lot from this. Keep up the good work.