Cool project page.
I'm not an employer and have minimal experience in the field of recruitment. To be honest my CV is quite messy in comparison.
But yours looks quite good to me, other than some things i've noticed, for example:
.......and passion reviewing me as overqualified for the maintenance job and praising my skills to design and improvement of factory efficiency.
Some basic grammar and punctuation mistakes. It also sounds a little bit too much like you're just boasting, like "look how great i am".
You might want to reword it to sound more "neutral" in terms of how you present yourself but without downplaying any achievements, of course.
"reviewing me as overqualified for the maintenance job" - sounds weird.
But let me try to rewrite part of that sentence myself, let's see...
"I have since received high praises from my superiors regarding my skills and work ethic, and have made a significant contribution to workplace efficiency."
First place in national mechatronics competition.
First place in ship modelling competition.
I'd expect to see at least a link to show what the competitions were about, because there is no way to confirm the validity of the claim, neither do i know what those competitions were about.
Would be great to have some people (with more experience under their belt) chime in, as i consider this a learning experience for myself also.