Dear Dave:
Excellent characterization. Very funny. Charming actress. Indeed this is the first sight I have had of Dave Jones' nincompoop alter ego. The Bermuda shorts in combination with the lab coat add a delightful extra tinge of nincompoopedness to the character. All you need add is a silly name Ala Wodehouse, like Augustus "Gussie" Fink-Nottle, lover of newts, a ridiculous British accent for your speaking parts and a chipmunk expression, when speaking. You could have a future in comedy. I do believe I prefer the lab glasses, although I would have to see the large black frames to be sure.
"I could see that, if not actually disgruntled, he was far from being gruntled."
P. G. Wodehouse
Best Regards
Clear Ether