Jeez. Why 12GBP part for something that can be solved with a couple of discretes?
Your differential mic amp is useless. Instead of simulating stuff, where it tells you nothing more that the simulation is worth, try breadboard it.
First, the amplifier has different input impedances in each input. Quite a fail, regarding CMRR. There is no easy fix for this, unless using a proper instrumentation amplifier configuration (three opamps).
Second, whats up with R9? Wtf is there doing?
And lastly, you're missing input protection (EMI) completely. Without it, microphone amplifier can't stand much chance.
Instead of trying to reinvent the weel, why not lookin for the easily available literature I have suggested? Or to also find some schematic service packs for good old analog mixing consoles? (Allen&heath, Behringer, ... a lot of schematics available). Most of them used off-the-shelf parts costing peanuts, yet delivering performance.
But, to be honest, even I have tried to reinvent mic preamps in the past, but I have done it with a soldering iron, so have hands-on experience with what works and how good. Just sayin, trying to save yerr some time
Here you go. Open the damn book I have suggested and read!
Ya'll be surprised how well this works. THis circuit still needs some tweaking (at least adding 470p-1000p caps from inputs to ground and to add small resistors in series with input pins, about 5ohms for damping. C3 should be increased to 470-1000uF, 6.3V rating sufficient.).